Freedom - A Chain Verse Comments
Soon I shall roam free
Free from the burden of this body
Body that captivated me for long
Long enough to keep me beguile.
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A very finest Chain Verse, Asim Sir! I have enjoyed very much this fantastic Chain Verse.5 Stars!
When the soul is free from the bondage of body, how wonderful it must be! A wonderful imagination!
This is really beautiful one. Do well reflecting the goodness one is filled with. Only we need to flow like river, destination will be ours in the meantime.
A nice attempt at 'chain verse'..a nice theme too..5*****
Classic poem using last word first in second line. Enjoyed reading it.
roam, roam here; and I'm roaming your poetic chain verse~
Superb: Tomorrow when this soul will see the light, Light of the day from the darkness of this body, Body which is mortal, but nurtures false ego, Ego, a burden that forced mind to enjoy.
Great lines from soul to the body: Enjoy the dust with which you are made of and And I shall roam free from every hassles.
A philosophical poem, body is temporary and soul is eternal. No one has seen soul.
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7/19/2025 6:07:19 AM # 1.0.0
Exce; ; ent...Enjoy the dust with which you are made of and And I shall roam free from every hassles.