Freedom Comments

you really write well....

This is a wonderful evocation of fight and I was flying myself as I read it. Your poem gives us the experience of flight but lets us articulate what it means. I myself put the search for meaning on hold and just re-read the poem and felt perfectly fulfilled in the FANTASY of flight. This is the magic of poetry: a poem's imagery is the opening to another world in which we are free to bustle!

Just beautiful Nosheen......! ! . Like this bird, soar high into the realms of poesy on view less wings!

Sometimes all we need is to be free as a bird.. But that freedom has its own price.. Very few amongst us dare to pay that.. A beautiful poem Nosheen.. Thank you.

Man-made chains of life. Nice work.

Superb, I may fall short of the adjectives to describe the beauty of this poem.....A M U S I N G....10++++

Wonderful - I love it. This is so much more than a poem about a bird. It is the essence of freedom. If you have time, read my poem A Tethered Bird and also Green Parrot. The theme is similar.