Thursday, January 1, 2015

Freedom Comments

Rating: 4.5

Flattened as a patch-work
On the concrete road,
Merciless humans passing by-
Dumb,
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Elena Tsonkova
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Sandra Feldman 01 January 2015

Indifference, so prevalent in the 21st century, technically so advanced! Nothing worse than not caring about anything or anybody. I love the ending, the birds, embodiment of freedom still embody some hope of freedom. Lovely 10/10. Welcome to poem hunter, like your work, please continue!

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Heather Wilkins 01 January 2015

feathers flee to follow the wind where ever it wishes to wonder true and nicely penned

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