Freedom...... Comments

Freedom is about the truth we find within ourselves! ! I agree with Kanniappan if you put it in poetic form, you show great promise!

a great write on freedom. Enjoyed the read.

good write.. poignant... true to heart... love it

nice suggestion but a well read poem

I agree with Kinniappan below. At the moment it is prose. Read other poets first and then write.

Dear Simran Arora, I read your topic 'Freedom' I understand your interest. But can you arrange the same in small lines and paragraphs? as follows: For me, my freedom is at the priority, combination of adjustment, and compromises in majority.... For me, my freedom is my wisdom, And wants to raise me up from all critic, with a working mind, out of room.... (likewise) . Congratulations.

nice poem as dhawan said great write and mature one

mature write inner sense meaning poem written good i like it