Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Freedom Comments

Rating: 4.5

I wake up every morning wondering how my day will be like,
here as i write, and here as i lay
Here are a few things that i have to say
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Jacob Guinn
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C.F Francis 03 July 2012

i love this! ! i can actually relate to this one lol

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Eric Miller 30 May 2012

Needs some grammar editing and it'll be better

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Indira Babbellapati 30 May 2012

you are on the right track...don't give up writing. i promise you, it will get better with each attempt!

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Ellie Mcafee 30 May 2012

SWEET! Awesome poem: D

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Steph Mcbride 30 May 2012

This is beautiful, You really thought about what write ad say in this, your very talented xxx

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Jacob Guinn

Jacob Guinn

San Ramon, California
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