Thursday, January 19, 2012

Freedom Comments

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How shall I wonder
when there is barrier all over the world
everyone is frightened with each other
a lot of energy, money and human time is wasted
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ramesh rai
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Shaun Payton 20 January 2012

I think busy is sometimes an internal excuse not to do things. This world needs more visual wanderings rather than more technology, wonderful poem.

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Hans Vr 20 January 2012

Deep questions raised in this very nice poem. I am sitting in front here of a most wonderful sunrise. Somehow, somewhere deep inside of me, I believe strongly that the world is getting better Even though we see in the news only negativity that is more because of the media's focus than because of the world. I truly bellieve that goodness is flowing (please read my poem flow) slowly penetrating in all layers of the population More and more people perform random kind acts Let us be actively a part of this incipiating kindness revolution I think we are living in very exciting times. Wow, Ramesh, your poem is really thought provoking Very good write!

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Vipins Puthooran 20 January 2012

Life is hectic but we've to plan new tactics as we are bound by sadness and happiness.....a meanigful and a great poem//top marks! ! !

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Wabi Sabi 20 January 2012

sadness and hapiness, freedom and responsibility, they always come in a rotation. Nice poem, I hope every one will get a freer and more flexible idea with this poem.

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