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Your so good, but despite it all, you are so blessed with such talent! Your way ahead of most! Fabulous!

one of the best writes to come across-well done

subtle insight and deep. What of beings slaves of freedom? Thanks for sharing keep on

By Jove! I appreciate the theme of the poem as slavery undid millions of live all across the globe. Now most of the souls are liberated yet now problems are terrorism and old problem of racism are soaring high. I marvel at these lines of the poem....... 'And one day He blessed me. The eyes of the feudalist mind opened, And ordered a word, a word, a word, that You have got ''Freedom''- '''''''''A salvation from slavery''''''''' Yes the poem started well with desperation and raised the tempo in the middle and ended in the at with solution and hope. A perfect masterpiece from The MAGICIAN OF WORDS Vipins... I will very soon you become one of top poets of 21 st century if keep writing like this... Perfect 10+++ is not enough to rate the poem. And a slave like me only knows, that, What is the meaning of ''Freedom''.. '

I loved it(: True meaning of Freedom

Freedom for which a lot of souls do not have to this day.. from a portrayer is nice to read. freedom a divine right well written...regards

I like this poem you used a strong words you're talented I encourage you to continue

Yep! Language Language Language. The Meaning Of Freedom Lives From Within......Bravo!

when i read your poem i feel for i everything understand your feelings... congrats great poem :)

Excellent descriptive language and pacing for a touching subject. Well captured with a thought provoking ending.

Im speechless and its was fanastic job on writting about freedom.

i was not in freedom until i attained it today.......what a nice write_amazingly spectacular?

What a screaming powerful delightful song of the soul. I am comsumed by the force of feelings unlocked that had been imprisoned, wanting to shout.....and shout you have, and I could listen to that shouting all my life....... A soul unlocked and bursting and savoring freedom. Only certain souls can bring it like that...so deliciously rare. Thank you so much for it Jim Troy

I feel so good when i reached at the end...It really having a key inside the poem to unlock any to free from burden cage...I like the deep side you tried to let us see by using a'sutured, cranium, marrow and mimosa' that exist harmonically in this work and it really work! ! ..Vipin once again you prove us that your hand got something! ! ! keep more writing friend! :) :) _Unwritten Soul

Your word choice is great, Vipins and the message is touching, no shaking up the heart of the reader. I really feel this is a fantastic poem with a message that really everyone should read. Somehow after reader the poem, I thought, a bit beyond the physical slavery, about the many of us who willingly enslave ourselves to drugs, to television, moods and so many other modern ills. Let's keep freedom very high up in out shelve of ideals.

Powerful words that can shake mountains, calm the Ocean's waves and can be heard loud and clear all over the World: FREEDOM! A reservoir of poignant words that can break the silenced voices from everywhere! Powerful words that penetrate the hearts of humanity! FREEDOM, a single word that you don't really appreciate until you lose it! An excellent write that clearly shows your great talent! 10+++ Well deserved! Keep inspiring the World with more of your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

beautiful word! ! Nice one Crimson Love

yeah, I agree with the comments down below, that the word choice enhances the poem, and puts it on a level. I also enjoyed the subtle transition from what seemed like the first section of the poem to the second; the flow in the former keeps the readers interest piqued, and the rhymes and near-rhymes of the latter half bring it all home to the final rung: freedom of the mind.

Freedom! :) Beauiful poem, and very nice choice of words, Makes the poem come to life! Well written! : D

Great poem. The choice of words and the Detail is amazing. This poem should touch Everyone. Very good write. May i invite you To read my new poem called justice part 2.