Freedom Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Freedom

Rating: 4.8


The first step towards freedom
Love

Smile
Make it eternal

The last step
Love

(2008/11/7)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kathy Langlois 10 November 2008

I could not have put into words any better, please continue too write such beautiful work. Kathy

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Julian Salvacion 09 November 2008

nice write! ! ! ! ...............

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Sandra Fowler 08 November 2008

The freedom to love...what a wonderful privilege! Ten for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Brianna Wilshusen 08 November 2008

Short and simple, yet still it makes since. I like it,10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 November 2008

True said.. After all A to Z love is the fact great piece....10++++

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 November 2008

And the message here, as i see it(aside from ''Big things come in small packages'') is: All that is good, in life...begins and ends with Love....Yes? Excellent Penning! FjR

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Chitra - 19 November 2008

a universal them a perfect equation to live by

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Linda Moore 17 November 2008

Very Nice.....Love is the answer to most of our problems it is the key to life.....10

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Lynda Robson 12 November 2008

The first and last step on the ladder of love, nice write, 10 Lynda xx

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Ramesh T A 12 November 2008

Yeah, love only keeps one free and smile keeps love alive!

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