Thursday, September 7, 2006

Freedom Comments

Rating: 5.0

Whilst your soul dances,
beneath the cradle of heaven's stars,
the tall grass gently caresses
your ankles.
...
Read full text

Sylvia Thomas
COMMENTS
Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 July 2008

A good theme with excellent diction.........

0 0 Reply
Silvia Thomas 07 September 2006

erm...Steve..my name's not wendy. thanks for your comment anyway!

0 0 Reply
Steve Hagget 07 September 2006

Hi Wendy - I love this poem - another great concept with well woven language. Tnaks Steve

0 0 Reply
Aashish Ameya 07 September 2006

simply gr8 thought..love this poem...

0 0 Reply
Sylvia Thomas

Sylvia Thomas

Los Angeles
Close
Error Success