Friday, January 27, 2006

Freedom Comments

Rating: 4.5

These prison walls can never tame
A heart as proud as mine,
No tiny cell, no dungeon hell,
Can make me scrape and whine.
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Tan Pratonix
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David Darbyshire 07 February 2006

Nice read tan dave................................good one

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Julia Klimenova 03 February 2006

Tan, this poem sounds unbelievably Russian to me! The rhyming scheme, the rhythm, the content - everything. We had some great poets writing about the same thing in similar words. Thank you. Julia.

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Elya Thorn 03 February 2006

I like this one, it talks about strngth! Good job! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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Bridgid Patrick 02 February 2006

great stuff. i really like this one. xx

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