Sunday, November 1, 2009

Freedom Comments

Rating: 4.8

look at the street u walked yesterday
the roads have been painted red and gray

once, i hold my love's hand
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Kianush Maleki
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Ramin Chaman 01 November 2009

I want to walk it is not my fault God made me I can never halt i want to walk and hold her hand it is my right, that is my land ... Hello Kianush I have not words 'tell you about our land. But I am worry and very sad. Because I think which our land is not for we. Really for most people' About your real poem' I guess its axiom Unfortunately we are in a sorry hopeless etc Meantime I wish you would have continued it…10+ For the best Ramin

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