Freedom is not an object
to be purchased from the shops,
it’s not like the giving of
one or two kilo’s of freedom chaps!
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Rex, I like your use of images in this one. You show the reader, rather than lecturing! Good on you!
I liked the last paragraph more than any other. And found the first paragraph quite unnecessary. The poem is beautiful in its appeal of liberty to our minds through the free and 'untamed' aspects of nature. I give you an '8' for this. Thank you, N.D.
This poem is very well penned and so beautiful. Great choice of words and a very unique writing style.