Tuesday, August 25, 2009

Freedom Comments

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As freedom fades
to twilight dim
and darkness filters in
Hopes fall
...
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James Timothy Jarrett
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Fay Slimm 28 August 2009

Appealing in poetic excellence Jim - strong piece - - and truly stated that freedom often has to be taken - very rarely given... love the imagery used. - - greetings from Fay. Cornwall U.K.

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