Tuesday, January 29, 2008

Freedom Comments

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What does freedom really mean?
My mother letting me make decisions,
That is freedom.
The ability to make my own passion,
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Bethany Maxwell
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Effie Yalena Steyn 07 April 2008

Surely freedom would be making your own decisions regardless of whether your mother lets you or not? Freedom for me was moving away from home even though I wasn't allowed to, taking liberty of my life and not living by the rules. But, you write really well and this is a great poem. Regards, Effie.

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Bethany Maxwell

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some where in this universe muhahaha
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