Saturday, June 18, 2005

Freedom Comments

Rating: 4.6

If destiny is manifest
and fate is set in stone
then nothing that you'll ever do
is down to you alone
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James Atkins
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Shannon Wright 18 January 2008

James- your writing gives me so much enjoyment, thanks for sharing. -shannon

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Ernestine Northover 19 October 2005

What a lovely use of words, and what a dictionary mind. Terrific. Sincerely Ernestine Northover

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Raynette Eitel 18 June 2005

Your rhymes are flawless and interesting, , but this is rather 'preachy.' (Just a bias I have.) I find your premise interesting in that I believe most of what happens to us as adults is through choice (poor or good) . Raynette

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