Freed My Soul Comments

You are so young! 23 - and: As I had taken birth, years ago, brilliant poem! your desire of Light is very close to my feelings! Thanks a lot!

The truth is the key about life; and, we have to uplift our respective minds towards righteous works to free our sousl. Nice work

True self sense, sure well all. yet, the becoming remember, the in spite of, not, because of.

So save me my lord, Freed my soul, And elevate it upwards, to the heavenly light..........Yes, God may free our soul. So nicely penned and presented. A beautiful poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. .....10

Waiting for salvation .Eager to free the soul ,fed with the materialistic world.Thanks for sharing

The prayer is from heart and He is going to listen for sure. Rich with vocabulary the lines flow smooth.Enjoyed.

It's not that I want to be immortal, Only I want to die in the light of your love So save me my Lord, And elevate, to the heavenly light. A voice of the conscience, well heard and inscribed in the heart Loved reading the poem, Added to my poem list