Wednesday, September 17, 2008

......Freed... Comments

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In search of new paradise I go
A land where fresh dreams grow
A step on ground, a step in the air
Transforming my gait, walking in flair
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Seema Aarella
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Reshma Ramesh 02 October 2008

seema this is sooo beautiful

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Aijaz Asif 25 September 2008

tremendous....an extremely beauriful write ma'am this poem is one of those poems which i read multiple times and everytime it felt like lets read it one more tme...this poem is so smooth like shereen a water that flows smoothly..specialy i luvd these 2 lines most...thanks 10x100 After a long sprint… to the edge of earth I lay peacefully…like I lay before my birth! ..bravo, bravo, bravo

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Ency Bearis 17 September 2008

great write...rhymes and nice to read...superb poem... Ency Bearis

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