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So expressive and very good imagery used...Great with two liner verses in each stanza. poetically refined.10+++

i liked your poem and i like what it expressed... it left me with so many unanswered questions idk if it was supposed to do that but it was good

It's cool how you used a small amout of words to express a big topic such as freedom. Also in your poems one line always seems to stand out to me. I like the line '...I was meant to fly...' and later how you commented your chained. Reminds me of the world. Everyone has a gift and is meant to succeed, its just up to us first before doing that to free ourselves from its chains.

Freedom is golden. Nice poem. Keep it up

yes freedom is what we need. nice form of words love it

Yes Cody! Your language simple, yet carries great meaning and aptly expressed...very good style and structuring of the poem...