Friday, March 11, 2005

Free-Will Mechanics Comments

Rating: 4.0

what straddles morning and
milks color from the dawn,
rushes down empty streets
into coffee-shops for kicks-
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Amberlee Carter
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Alfredo Jacques 07 September 2007

you reminded me by putting one foot in front of the other, I have a journey to end or to begin. great stanza and even greater poem thank you again for such wonderful words.

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Joy Vanderhelm 02 January 2006

Absolutely stunning, though I had trouble understanding the beginning. It sounded, from the way you started out, like you were describing something, but you gave it no true name. I figured it out by the end, though. Very nice.

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