Friday, April 19, 2019

Free Will? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I observe the world through tear-filled eyes
As deceitful bounders don their disguise,
Pretending to care for the down-trodden,
Their pledge of compassion, soon forgotten
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Lora Colon
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Bipasha D 23 April 2019

I think its sort of both. Always a pleasure to read your poems :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 April 2019

This is a great phiosophical poem having touching expression and impressive collocation. The last stanza's last line reveals great message through question tag. Thank you dear sir for poating this gem with us. Full vote.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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