Thursday, June 12, 2014

Free Will Comments

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Free will is an addict
dependent on time and place.
It cant bloom where
bellies are empty.
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Noreen Carden
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Daniel Brick 18 June 2014

You present four examples that contradict the notion of free will, and I am persuaded of your thesis it's an addict's dream, not a reality. But at the very end you portray God with an INDULGENT SMILE. I'm not sure I know what that smile means. I hope it's not ironic, like Puck saying, O WHAT FOOLS THESE MORTAL BE! A creator god has no right to say that about creatures he made as LIMITED BEINGS. Can you give me some insight into the tone and/or meaning of God's smile? ? Does HIS RULE IS ALL THERE IS mean God is micro-managing the universe? ? Your poem caught me in a feisty, questioning mind frame! !

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Chuy Amante 17 June 2014

All is is and in that we flow regardless of what we do or know! I know your heart and love it!

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