Monday, July 15, 2013

Free Will Comments

Rating: 5.0

On my canvas white
The characters spill
At free will.
They roll
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Ken E Hall 22 July 2013

So short but with plenty of meaning as free will spills with anyone the reader wants to picture, original lines here a one off well written...regards

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Caty Prager 16 July 2013

great poem! I love how simple it is and yet has so much meaning. :)

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Ramesh Rai 15 July 2013

beautiful lines. Nice Haiku. On my canvas white The characters spill At free will. They roll Without control Way they feel.

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