Tuesday, May 20, 2008

Free Us Comments

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free us from heartache, pain
free us from selfish gain
free us from ourselves
when we are the problem
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Harlan Simantel
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Rajnish Manga 29 October 2016

free us from ourselves... see you in each of us free us from whatever else is wrong we thank you, father, with a heartfelt song.... Great poem.... earnest prayer. Thanks a lot.

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 October 2016

This is wonderful poetry.There is sincerity and honesty in your prayer to make the world a beautiful place by freeing it from all evil forces. May this prayer comes true. Congrats.

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Savita Tyagi 28 October 2016

A very heart felt prayer. Thank you for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2016

We need freedom in life and recovery at right time. Life is full of pain, agony and sorrow. We do not need these any more. We need life with love and peace and caring. God can give us everything while we connect him. Great piece of work and this is thoughtful as well as thought provoking....10....Congratulations for poem of the day!

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Bharati Nayak 28 October 2016

The poem is a heartfelt prayer before God to free us from all things evil, a prayer to cleanse our inner world and outer world.Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.Congratulations for Poem of the Day.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 October 2016

Better be free than dead while alive. Amazing conceptualization. Thanks for sharing this worthy write that has been recognized as POD. Heartiest Congrats on that.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 October 2016

Free us from the pains on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bisy Untan 28 October 2016

A heart felt prayer. Thank you for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 October 2016

Good work! ... Congrats for being chosen for the day.....

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Kim Barney 28 October 2016

A heartfelt poem. Congrats on having it selected as poem of the day! Well done.

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Harlan Simantel

Harlan Simantel

Hillsboro, Oregon USA
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