Monday, November 16, 2015

Free To Be Me Comments

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Walking on a road
Through trees shadow
Looking for a way out
Where i can feel
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Asma Zenjali
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C. P. Sharma 20 September 2016

Sincere feelings very well penned. Discrimination in any form is a sin as we all are children of the same God. As for colors we feel proud that Lord Krishna and Lord Rama were dark complexioned but they won the hearts of the people. I am of the view that we too are to be blamed for it as we develop some sort of inferiority complex within us that makes us suffer. If this complex is not there in us we too can boldly assert ourselves, else the others take advantage and repress. Anyways, a good attempt, Asma.

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Asma Zenjali 03 January 2017

Thank u for your opinion, very appreciated dear poet

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Asma Zenjali 17 August 2016

That is right zion glad you agree with me

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Abderrahmane Dakir 29 December 2015

I like it so much, we are created unique so we have to be proud with this. Thank you so much.

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Fabrizio Frosini 20 December 2015

HELLO, Asma! as I promised, our ebook is ready well, at this very moment, it is in revision - by Amazon - but in a few hours it will be online BUT, PLEASE, WAIT for my EMAIL, before sending the letters.. because I have some news.. CIAO! :

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 November 2015

They are wrong For not accepting me As a man from diffrent race... it is challenging to stand firmly to what you are.. colour, race, religion, knowledge, wisdom. Be yourself because nobody can be you in this world. you are powerful when you say i want to be me. thank you. Tony

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Fabrizio Frosini 16 November 2015

''Not willing to see The diffrence between them and me'' those differences are just the surface details that only void minds think to be important, so to deny any 'human brotherhood'. But the point is just that we are all human beings, with no real differences.. Thanks for sharing, dear Asma

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Asma Zenjali 16 November 2015

Yap that's right we all human beings we born the same way and we are going to have the same end no matter what and who we are you are welcome!

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Simone Inez Harriman 16 November 2015

I feel the sadness in your poem Asma. I wish people weren't made to feel this way......10

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Asma Zenjali 16 November 2015

I wish that too but the feeling of superiority and make others lk inferior iseverywherunftunately that's reality

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M Asim Nehal 16 November 2015

Nice poem on racism, this is very much prevalent in our society and people do mind about the colour, caste creed etc....10++

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Asma Zenjali 16 November 2015

Thanks for reading glad you did :)

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