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The world may soon perish
Your love, I shall ever cherish
A flowing river, don't let it stop
A little bit of heaven may drop
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Wonderful. I sincerely appreciate your innate skills. Long live your poetry!
Inside the love's passion, we heal Today sky has no bright stars We are free from worldly bars. Nicely described..
Wonderful song of Liberation. It shows how being a good person has rewards that sinners/criminals never trust. But hope and trust lead us to this happiness in being a decent human being. Keep singing your bright songs, Nosheen!
Hi Nosheen, A beautiful poem on love. The imagery of flowing river and the 'dropping of a bit of heaven'. fantastic. The feeling of love and passion aptly captured in the simple images. I have read something about Rumi, and a few of his poems translated in Malayalam. His poems mostly are on love and separation, if I remember correctly. You could easily fit the poem in his style. The right choice of expression, form of poetry to express the feeling of love. Good. Keep it up.
Outstanding duo, double dose of Rubaiyat on same topic is amusing....Loved it, Nosheen...Ramzan Kareem.
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Love is a healing power.