Saturday, January 16, 2016

Free Ride Comments

Rating: 5.0

It wasn't long...It wasn't fair!
That I realized that when I lay in bed
My whole world would turn around
When laying to the left
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Luz H.
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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 December 2019

A well crafted composition, dear Ma’am Luz...10++❤️

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 December 2018

But wouldn't it make more sense To pass my ride to those kids out there, Playing round and round? beautiful thoughts and imagination.... even when u think of death, on the way you like to play and go round and make merry and smile with the little ones. thank u dear. tony

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Luz Hanaii 17 December 2018

It is about a time when I had vertigo. Which I hated and remembered how much fun it was to go in circles get dizzy when I was young.

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