Thursday, August 25, 2022

Free Of Wishes Comments

Rating: 5.0

To a small boat load of annoying
Wishes I release it into the sea
Tides will carry it to an unknown
Land and I feel relax and free
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Richard Wlodarski 26 August 2022

Your poem is a great meditative exercise in freeing the mind of annoying issues. Love it, Poet Panda! I would love to read some more on this subject!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 August 2022

Tides will carry it to an unknown land...great imagination. A beautiful poem. Loved it....Top score!

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Nosheen Irfan 26 August 2022

Beautifully penned. A sailing across the river would be great to be away from worries.

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Nabakishore Dash 26 August 2022

After annoyance is loaded in ship, you feel free.But how did you load be known to me please.I can also load the annoyance of all.

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