To a small boat load of annoying
Wishes I release it into the sea
Tides will carry it to an unknown
Land and I feel relax and free
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Tides will carry it to an unknown land...great imagination. A beautiful poem. Loved it....Top score!
Beautifully penned. A sailing across the river would be great to be away from worries.
After annoyance is loaded in ship, you feel free.But how did you load be known to me please.I can also load the annoyance of all.
Your poem is a great meditative exercise in freeing the mind of annoying issues. Love it, Poet Panda! I would love to read some more on this subject!