Thursday, August 6, 2020

Free From Worldly Hassles Comments

Rating: 5.0

At the foothills of a valley
Where the sun is ready to set
And the water body is surrounded
By the dense forest
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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 09 January 2021

Excellent poem with great picture.

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Deepak S S 20 October 2020

Marvellous poem 5*

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2020

Muse of the sun! ! ! ! With the romance of nature; Sunshine love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Nosheen Irfan 09 August 2020

Just amazing. You are at your best here. So good to read such sterling poetry on a nice lazy Sunday. I wish I could give more than 10.

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Darren Jkoeryo 07 August 2020

Fantastic flow once again my applause Right in the middle of the lake Surrounded by the lotus Floating carefree Free from worldly hassles Four eyes talking to each other

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S H 06 August 2020

You took me on a journey with this poem. The beauty of words and phrases can never be undermined. Top 10.

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Shreya Hacks 06 August 2020

Great imagery and fine flow in your poem...10/10

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Juhaina Tumlu 06 August 2020

Straight to my favourite list of poems..... I saw an abandoned boat Right in the middle of the lake Surrounded by the lotus Floating carefree Free from worldly hassles Four eyes talking to each other

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Mj Lemon 06 August 2020

What you describe...perfection, freedom! This verse goes to myfavourites.

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Gino Valentine 06 August 2020

Once your search foe such place is over do inform me I will join those two lovers there with my dame to kick my ownself.

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