Free From Shackles Of World Comments
Be thou the one to beat
Both victory and defeat,
Be free from shackles of the world.
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Great poem that hails peace and humanity. Attractive style and Impeccable vocabulary yours. You would certainly have succeeded in your rebuild 10+
Man needs to slow down sometimes and be in solitude. Amid crazy movement and hectic pursuits, man will be restless. As long as we have breath, we live. But when God calls us to Eternal sleep, we have to leave all our mad pursuits and leave this world. Very profound thoughts and a great write!
A perfect understanding of the poem, though often a poem too much analysed is a poem paralyzed. Thanks for the good words.
For your self's own good Cultivate solitude, Get aloof from noise of this world....... impressive inscription with lofty theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
For your self's own good Cultivate solitude, Get aloof from noise of this world.., ....yes, it is. We must get aloof from noise in order to have good results for us. Brilliant poem. Thanks for sharing with Poet's Note.
Yes dear poet, an interesting form of poetry, Ghazals are couplets bound in a bouquet of five to seven stanzas, a common thread running throughout. Here, there are three lines, the last line of each stanza ends with the same rhyme. Thanks indeed.
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Doubt not! ! Only follow the works of the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Follow the truth without doubt, yes, thanks for visiting.