I don’t want to let go, it seems I must,
Lost and confused I just don’t know what to feel.
Free falling, every second I grow closer,
To my final destination.
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Your poem is a big giant illustration. I can see you lying on the floor wondering whats going to happen tommorow and in the future. Good luck with everything you do.
Your poem is very good! ! ! :) You have talent.