Monday, January 12, 2009

~ Free Falling ~ Comments

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a bird sinks down
through the wind,
unmindful of clouds
to cushion its fall
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Alice Cuenca
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Rajnish Manga 11 September 2016

Wonderful imagery, as if straight from the Greek or the Roman mythology. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Antonio Liao 02 April 2009

if only I can....free fall.... i'll do it...but life is complicated to fall you make great things happen in our lives today....what a best poem I ever read...Thnak you God bless

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Sadiqullah Khan 21 January 2009

Free fall is not a bad idea altogether, , , we need to trust nature at times, ,10

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Sonya Florentino 15 January 2009

I always wanted to write a poem about a bird that wanted to fall, because it had forgoteen it had wings... thank you for your beautiful poem-I don't need to write that poem anymore.

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Mifael Llauderes 15 January 2009

perhaps love is the strongest propeller...

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Sadiqullah Khan 15 January 2009

We are now on the mercy of gravity, , think one day we will be deprived of this may be....10

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Ying Escalona 14 January 2009

at nine point eight meter per second squared

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Eddie Roa 12 January 2009

Nice piece. I could almost feel the wind rushing in my face as I plummet togehter with your winged god. Is it Eros or Icarus?

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Hazel Calumarde Cobol 12 January 2009

I'm just a little curious about who that god is?

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Hazel Calumarde Cobol 12 January 2009

nice poem~ Something to reflect about.

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Sandra Fowler 12 January 2009

Very metaphorical. You are a fine imagist. Kind regards, Sandra

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Ric Bastasa 12 January 2009

sad..winged god, stripped of love, deprived, has fallen.. i see, it is deep from your heart. so graciously written.

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