a bird sinks down
through the wind,
unmindful of clouds
to cushion its fall
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if only I can....free fall.... i'll do it...but life is complicated to fall you make great things happen in our lives today....what a best poem I ever read...Thnak you God bless
Free fall is not a bad idea altogether, , , we need to trust nature at times, ,10
I always wanted to write a poem about a bird that wanted to fall, because it had forgoteen it had wings... thank you for your beautiful poem-I don't need to write that poem anymore.
We are now on the mercy of gravity, , think one day we will be deprived of this may be....10
Nice piece. I could almost feel the wind rushing in my face as I plummet togehter with your winged god. Is it Eros or Icarus?
Very metaphorical. You are a fine imagist. Kind regards, Sandra
sad..winged god, stripped of love, deprived, has fallen.. i see, it is deep from your heart. so graciously written.
Wonderful imagery, as if straight from the Greek or the Roman mythology. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.