Monday, September 17, 2007

Free Butterfly Comments

Rating: 4.7

Clouds moving slowly and glowing red,
As the Sun sets down on the glistening sea.
Watching as the star come out to play,
They light up the sky for me.
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EMMA Funnell
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Ibrahim Ercan 12 September 2008

A nice poem that portrays one’s inner feeling elegantly. Our stars are in our mind –dark and light-that we sometimes touch on their smiling faces up in the sky, maybe they’re so high but not as high as the emotions that she creates on a seashore bay, lying on the sundered beach, boiling for freedom in the body cage. To be free like a butterfly she wants to release her handcuffed birds into the piercing sky.

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