Swooping down for a bite
The little sparrow landed on my wall
Picked the tiny crumbs in its beak
And flew away, oblivious to my gaze
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It is a beautiful poem on freedom with full positiveness. Stunning expression. I want to quote some lines here... Let me borrow your wings I want to feel the lightness of the air Entering my heart without a knock Freeing it from the weight of mankind Letting it taste unhindered flight Because I had been a human too long Let me be free now, free as a bird. Thanks for sharing.
Let me be free now, free as a bird Very touching and inspirational. I really like this poem. I will add it to my poem list! Well done NosheeN- You are a gifted poet!
Excellent observation, amazing thoughts, enchanting style of description, an outstanding poem. Because I had been a human too long Let me be free now, free as a bird..................lovely lines.
Reads even more sublime the second time. Wonderful wkrds my friend!