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Excellent! Dear Keith! You are very deep and touching in all of your works and I admire you and your talent! Your ability to pen your strong feelings in a beautiful and clear writing format! Your potential is quite clear in this powerful write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC

A write that speaks of being 'free.' Being free is the most essential and beautiful thing, feel, the very essence of life! ....At last ya free - freedom is the play of thought- it makes one bound and free..so free the mind everything else get freed but desiring for freedom is very essential to be free in the real sense! ..Winnie

I give this a definite 10. When you read it you can not only hear the strength but feel it to. And that my friend is an art form you seem to have perfected.

through an arduous jorney, a sojourn of seeking, enlightenment through the elements, the gifts of the earth, that washes us clean with it waters, sterilizes us through and through with fire, blows away our afflictions, from the dust allows us to be born again, with newfangled innocence, and a new beginning, the sun shines down, giving light to new life, allowing it to flourish, and begin it's journey again. Great work Keith. you are able to elegantly express yourself while still allowing your strength to shine through. another enjoyable poem.10 all they way my friend. Jen

Very much enjoyed that one! ! ! !

Another great poem. Also another poem which i can relate to. Loved it.

The way you rhyme is truly incredible. I would have never thought to rhyme specificly and epiphany!

This one was happy! I enjoyed it!

Yes, an epiphanous moment, when dejection can be put behind, new horizons staked and conquered.

All I can say is wow this poem is wow

Very fine indeed..... sir.

Very inspiring. It's clear how hard it was to overcome your hardships. Your use of imagery is very vivid and attention-grabbing. Totally dig it!

it stayed on point- my mind never wandered -only dug deeper

It's like you feel the need to accomplish your hope and dreams, but you don't know where to start- for there are many routes to your own enlightenment.

that one was good...i liked the beginning of it and how u ended it

My favorite poem by you so far.

beautiful poem.. delicately inspiring 10++

Of course another wonderfu poem. The imagery was sooo excellent. I love the way your mind works =] -Tyease

Once again, just beautiful, the imagery is wonderful. I'm speechless.. You put so much feeling in your poems, I can feel every word that you've described here in this wonderful piece! ~Hazel G.E

yeh i too love the ending of your poem may sun shine on u always dear Keith regards anju