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what is it must i do to be free of you
of all expectations
dreams and desires
hopes and wishes
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C.S. Keskuela
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Quin Bland 22 January 2010

I like how the 'You' in this poem can be relatable to a million different situations. Anyone reading this intently will, instead of wondering what your 'you' is, would first inser their 'you', whatever it may be, to complete the poem and individualize it, almost signing it with their own personality. Always a good trait in poetry

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