Friday, August 21, 2009

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You always wanted to be with me,
But I really need my space,
I like to feel that I’m free,
I don’t always want to see your face.
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Michael Moorcroft
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Latasha Hall 15 September 2009

I agree with Sara... I was in a relationship you described above, so I ended it. But now I'm in one that I have never felt that way. I feel free and extraordinary when I'm with him. I love him so much. I feel as if we were born together and we've always been together, and together we strive in life and are free as one, or two... Love is hard to explain. But this is a wonderful poem! You are very talented.

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Danny H 21 August 2009

Everyone needs to be independent, and free in a relationship you arnt to be one, but be two feeling as one. Yet still your own person Great Poem

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