Tuesday, July 7, 2015

Frederick And Geraldine (Part 23) Comments

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Situated in the green Corfu and having thousands
Of olive trees and flower-strewn countryside, Prinylas is
A nice, Adriatic-style village; its square and narrow paths,
Mansions and alleys are far away from the rifle bullets' whiz.
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Marieta Maglas
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Rajendran Muthiah 07 July 2015

The poet contributes varieties of poems. This poem describes places with apt diction. The poet wants to write about exorcism, practised by people. In my own experience, I had seen when a black wet substance was smeared on my brother's body, an evil spirit ran out. I got that substance from one of my distant relation who was called a magician by his neighbours. He was said to be having a command over the fairies to do things he wants. Let Marieta Maglas present her lines to make us fall in awe and wonder. If she reads some supernatural stories and dramas, she can get some suitable vocabulary to continue her poem. Best Wishes.

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