Wednesday, December 17, 2014

Fred Claus Got It Right Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cried when I saw children being called 'bad'

but cried even louder,
for joy, when all
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Chuy Amante
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 December 2014

I cried when I saw children being called 'bad' I cried when I saw children being called 'bad' but cried even louder, for joy, when all children were called 'NICE' - - -Very nicely envisioned. Word choice is very good. Many thanks Respected Sir!

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Michael Mcparland 18 December 2014

Beautiful poem of love and acceptance. A true and well deserving 10.

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Neela Nath Das 17 December 2014

Be one with your brother, give him as you would like to receive receive by giving, god fills those vacuums like he fills those stockings - - - Profound lines.

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