Friday, September 23, 2005

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So, here you are my friend
so dead and all alone
for you it is the end
a pile of dust and bone.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 24 September 2005

I was never one to hoard money but I know people that to do and it is sad...you can't take with you so what is the point...good poem!

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Mary Nagy 23 September 2005

Some very gruesome images yet still manages to be a very thoughtful and caring poem. Very nice. I never understand why people 'hoard' money till they die....what good does it do them? I think I would just have fun with it. (Maybe I feel that way because I don't have money......or maybe I don't have money because I feel that way? ? ? ?) Nice poem Herbert. Sincerely, Mary

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