Monday, August 8, 2011

Freak Comments

Rating: ★5.0

I'm a loser, I'm a freak
In your shadow is where I sleep
I feel like such a disgrace
God dammit why do you choose to stay
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Damian Fisher
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Elizabeth Grace 18 August 2011

Dearest Damian, this is an inspired story. The form you have given it, the continuity of the slant rhymes, and the overall message make this a beautiful piece. Keep writing. I look forward to seeing more of your work. Ten out of ten.: D

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Stefanie Fontker 12 August 2011

A beautiful journey. A well written, amazing poem.

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Damian Fisher

Damian Fisher

Lafayette, Indiana
Damian Fisher
Damian Fisher
Lafayette, Indiana
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