Frantic Lure [edwards Journey] Comments

blue skies crosshatched upon a star mere condensation shared amongst the world mere tear drops that fell from the heavens the first time I heard you sing dispite the sounds lips can make actions proved worthy my words love you more as my lips seek the world for you. very fine poem. tear drops, heaven, your singing, lips, my words. really a very good poem.thank you very much dear poet. tony