Saturday, September 23, 2017

Frankenstein's Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

Me know the names of things,
But not yet the feelings in their beings.

Me know you have to hold a thing,
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Troy Cochran
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Sarah Cochran 15 March 2020

Absolutely a ten

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Sarah Cochran 15 March 2020

That’s a very honest poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2017

This particular poem, written in 2008, comes with a particularly vivid memory is really very interesting and wonderful idea you have shared through this poem that reflects perception. We are glad to read such a poem penned in 2008 from your chapbook titled, October Gallows. Name of things are known but feelings are still unknown but these remain in memory. Crushing power of brain bleeds all memories. But still we have to hold them like a child holds. Doctor holds this to explain. Molecular dream mesmerizes mind. Leaves' and 'sap' and 'syrup' and 'serum; these come in mind to judge and take on advice of doctor. But 'photonic light' and 'nucleic' life' and 'the molecular dream rush in to life to do more research. Invisible and tiny particles scribble mind. Definitely one day understanding will come. Amazing, powerful and brilliant poem is excellently penned and shared here...10

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Troy Cochran 24 September 2017

Thank you, Kumarmani, ... and I am still researching! Spirituality in the psyche, and how the divine factors into the physics and metaphysics of the body, is a particular fascination for me. But the more I age, the more I see that my intelligence will probably always be tripping over itself. It has a circumscribed view of things. The heart/soul seems to have the better sense of things. :)

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