Monday, November 21, 2005

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The lots are a collusion of lawn tools
Rakes bark at sidewalks
Mowers ruminate, roaring in fescue
Pink flamingo statuary and black jockeys
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George Murdock
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Patti Masterman 30 October 2006

I love your creative language here, mowers ruminate, rakes bark..and the silence, at the end, which always accompanies human conversations, and jousts. LOL.

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John Kay 03 December 2005

And this poem makes it clear why I did. You too are a word man.

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G. Murdock 21 November 2005

my youthful friend John Kay told me to write a poem. So I did.

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