Sunday, November 15, 2009

Framed Comments

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Strangeness coming over me, I wait for my time of demise
As I stare my enemy in the eyes.
It’s like a wanting to end it all
But too afraid to fall.
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Nicole Gehrman
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Cat Tiger 04 February 2010

All the cunning of t wild cat whose life values death.

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Alien Zoo 22 November 2009

I like this one, but it also kinda fears me. Because I hope I'll never feel like this, but I fear I maybe do someday.

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Really like the rhyming sceme, and your metaphors are really good too! I love 'The haunting passion is at a freeze', I can really understand what you mean.

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Nicole Gehrman

Nicole Gehrman

Colfax, Wisconsin
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