Saturday, July 10, 2021

Frail Mankind Comments

Rating: 5.0

When The Chinese Dragon hissed out deadly fire
The Damoclean sword fell down, burning the hair
Daily-need vendors began to make hay in the sun
Deceiving all trading morals and ethics for more.
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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M Asim Nehal 17 July 2021

Wonderful poem, SUBLIME: I quote 'All for nothing but a sumptuous feast for Corona. Money lacks strength to withstand punishments! ' 5****

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Thank you very much dear Asim Nehal for your valuable appreciation. I have always been wondering why man loots man knowing that life is ephemera

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 July 2021

Beautiful verses full of images...

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You deserve abundant thanks from me dear RMJ. Your comments have always been a source of inspiration

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 July 2021

Perceptive lines that depict fraud and greediness of mankind

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 July 2021

Incisive and powerful poem well expressed

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Thank you very much dear RMJ.I was furious against the wretcdness of people who are hooking money out of others helplessness

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 July 2021

A brilliant write with powerful ending! I add- life is like a water bubble sir. this is the reality...5 stars for this perceptive piece!

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I was really shocked to see greedy men fishing out of troubled water without any conscience . They will be very late to realise it's meaninglessness in such a life that lasts for moments

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Petroleum companies are public sector undertakings of the Govt. Still.....

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 July 2021

Part 7. NAY, the government plays a willing accomplice in the loot. Indian government hiked the prices of petroleum products beyond the skies, allowing the petroleum companies to loot the public.

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 July 2021

Part 5. Same with online trade and doorstep delivery. While the companies monopolised online sales, they tend to overcharge the customer. The government who was supposed to control prices, decided to look the other way.

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 July 2021

Part 4. Nobody could do anything, because almost every country was bankrupt, while Chinese economy flourished.

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 July 2021

Part 3 And Chine made a killing by exporting various machinery and medicines to treat COVID-19 to all countries

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 July 2021

Part 2 It was alleged that the Chinese let loose the venomous dragon on the world. But, the world failed to join hands to punish the Chinese

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 July 2021

Most pertinent writing. Marvellous poem. True, in the time of the pandemic, online trading flourished.

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