Frail, Alone But Smiling, Living! Comments

well it always help when i know i m not the only person to go through this state.. it always does help when you get your burden out of your head by writing.. this is a nice write..., with love shan

Fab Piece well done, easy to read and deep too well done!

Growing up, a learning experience, U r poem has the intensity, a life experience packed in a poem. Best wishes.

'it seemed as if life said and forced me to live and believe that my stay in this world was only to fulfill the purpose for what others dreamt of living a life of servant though everyone called me a friend thinking i was still a fool unaware of bein dragged like a rag doll' yes, others are capable of doing anything to gain for themselves, using their victim who is forced to endure the imposed control, but slavery must end... great piece...thank you for sharing...