Thursday, September 3, 2009

*fragrant With Heaven Comments

Rating: 2.9

Every day is folded around
A soft center, fragrant with heaven.
To unwrap that moment
Carefully peeling back
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Lillian Susan Thomas
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Susan Jarvis 13 September 2009

This heartfelt, piece conveys the sheer power of the written word with all the subtlety and beauty of an accomplished poet. From the magnificent title to the poignant closing lines, this work of art will linger on in the reader's heart long after leaving the page. S :)

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Sandra Fowler 11 September 2009

This poem had its genesis in a very compassionate heart. I love the little girl for the strength of her fragility.10/10. Warm wishes, Sandra

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Barbara Terry 03 September 2009

Life is a war zone that we fight everyday. This poem touches me because I can actually identify with most of it. Thank you for sharing. A 10+++++ Love & hugs, Barbara

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