Fragrant With Heaven Comments
Every day is folded around
A soft center, fragrant with heaven.
To unwrap that moment
Carefully peeling back
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You should retitle this poem Hard Life and manipulate the lines some to make one stanza. It is a good poem. Please do not misunderstand me. But I think the title and its early resolve do not serve the whole poem. And thematically you need to follow up on the why of the hard life, in all aspects.
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9/9/2025 2:16:42 PM # 1.0.0
Write comment. Great poetry, Lillian. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks