Fragrant Moments. Comments

Fay, this is perfect in full measure - rhyme and rhythm.10+++++++++++ Mind, vials of essence stores Fragrance of the youth galore, Just swab the choicest scent Whenever, you feel indolent. CP

Hi Fay - Lovely poem with form - rhyme and rhythm. This is very appropriate in a poem about scents. The study of AROMATHERAPY reveals that fragrances are specific to individuals - a scent that complements their personality. Fragrances are also specific to places and - in our memories - to very special occasions! In you poem you remind us of the effect of fragrances: they 'Enliven' 'Enhance love' 'Uplift' a beautiful elegant poem well deseving of a TEN for a super-Poetess! Love in poetry - JOHN

Oh WOW, simply beautiful! ! I could just see myself walking through a meadow on a gorgeous breezey spring day...10

This is such a sensually inspiring poem, Fay, and your delicious phrasing in this fine write was a pleasure to read and experience and left me hanging on every wonderful word. Carl.

Fay, you weave perfume magic into this magical poem. Your perfume wafts across the page and brings with it your talented words. 10 love Karin

Divine. Scent, fragrance, aromas...the very essence of poetry.

Hi Fay - I like your poetic style with lots of........................................... which allows us to read - what we will - between your lines! It is free verse with no costarint of metre or rhyme. This allows you gret freedom of words. You make good use of thsi freedom. I am a Chemist with an interest in aromatherapy and this is a very fragrant poem. The delicacy of the sense of smell in seduction is very very important as is the 'sublty' of perfume. The affect of fragrance is deliciously described in the opening verse (5 lines) - it makes us 'feel alive' 'open minded' and 'uplifted'. In verse two (3 lines) you remind us that spring is a very emotive and fragrant season. 'Wafting love words' vibrate the air and there is a symbiosis of 'mixed spice aromas'. In verse three (2 lines) there is a climax of 'odoured amour' and 'perfumed hours'. If men would take the time to understand the symbolism and techniques of Aromatherapy - their ladies would have much to smile about! I love your poem - love you in Poetry - JOHN.

The smells of a garden in full bloom night scented flowers across the room a heady fragrance wafts in the air deliciously! a love affair

Fay you spilled perfumes words...... in this

Fay, I really love the way this is written...it spills out of the mouth and lingers on the air...beautiful, as always.

My senses are as open as the wind, and ingesting the virtual essence of your effulgent rendering, young lady! Very Fine work, Fay, indeed! FjR

You spread a lovely fragrance Fay with this beautiful poem...10 ofcourse

Lovely words, beautiful moments Fay, a lovely piece,10/10 Tom

Nice warm piece of poetry Fay enjoyed this thank you Daniel