Friday, February 13, 2009

Fragrance Of Her Body Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her back is turned towards me, my hands upon her hips
The scent she wore, a womans heady wine,
My touch upon her silken skin, so soft my fingertips
As her body nestled closer into mine.
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Laurie hill
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Sonya Florentino 27 September 2009

i didn't comment on this poem before the first time around because I was kind of embarrassed to admit that I was....(ahem) ....affected by it....but I guess you know a woman who says she isn't is lying!

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Irene Clark-hogg 07 August 2009

Exciting, entrancing, romantic and all the other Mmmmmm words. Your skillful pen does you credit, Laurie. Irene

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What can I say! That it is oh! so romantic and I sighed too as I read it Laurie. It is soft and beautiful with alluring rhyme and style. Wonderful poetry... 10 Karin Anderson

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Susan Jarvis 05 July 2009

This poem has it all - rhyme, rhythm and romance. By the way, can you let me know the name of the fragrance? ! S ;)

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T S 05 June 2009

The King of Romantic Poetry LOL Beautiful Poem 10 ++++ Tracy

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Susan Bagley 29 April 2009

Did I not comment on this one? How could I not? I must have sent it to your inbox. But goodness me, What a sensuous lovely romantic poem. If only someone felt that way about having been with me. Sigh............

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Costa Anakiev 25 April 2009

well written, reminds me of the days that passed

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